Hi Charles, I think your application letter is generally good. The content is good supported with good example. The coherency is good as well. The only thing I want to add is the sender and recipient address. If I am not wrong, the format is 10 percent for the grading of application letter. I believe you will add that in the hard copy for submission.
Hi Charles!! It's a really nice cover letter:) Especially, you separate every skill to different paragraph, which made it more easy to catch the point! This letter may make the employer to know you more:) Oh, by the way, about the format which Bo Hui mention, I think you will notice this part when you summit it:)
Hey Charles! I think your application letter is well covered, with examples clearly stated to tell the employer how hiring you can benefit them.
I also liked the part where you told the employer about how you got the inspiration to take up the job. Think that will make the employer have a better impression of you right from the start :D
Hi Charles, I think your application letter is generally good. The content is good supported with good example. The coherency is good as well. The only thing I want to add is the sender and recipient address. If I am not wrong, the format is 10 percent for the grading of application letter. I believe you will add that in the hard copy for submission.
ReplyDeleteHi Charles!! It's a really nice cover letter:) Especially, you separate every skill to different paragraph, which made it more easy to catch the point! This letter may make the employer to know you more:) Oh, by the way, about the format which Bo Hui mention, I think you will notice this part when you summit it:)
ReplyDeleteHey Charles! I think your application letter is well covered, with examples clearly stated to tell the employer how hiring you can benefit them.
ReplyDeleteI also liked the part where you told the employer about how you got the inspiration to take up the job. Think that will make the employer have a better impression of you right from the start :D